Have you ever had a dream, that you were so sure was real? What if you were unable to wake from that dream? How would you know the difference between the dream world and the real world?

What you know you can't explain, but you feel it. You've felt it your entire deviant life, that there's something wrong with the story. You don't know what it is, but it's there, like a splinter in your mind, driving you mad.

You take the blue pill, the story ends. Your browser closes and you believe whatever you want to believe. You take the red pill, you stay in wonderland. And, I show you how deep the rabbit hole goes.

I offer only the truth, nothing more.

Take: The Red Pill
Take: The Blue Pill

spyed, nobody has ever done this before.
I know. That's why it's going to work.



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The Angry Deviant



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One entry found for coda.
Main Entry: co·da
Pronunciation: 'kO-d&
Function: noun
Etymology: Italian, literally, tail, from Latin cauda
Date: circa 1753
1 a : a concluding musical section that is formally distinct from the main structure b : a concluding part of a literary or dramatic work
2 : something that serves to round out, conclude, or summarize yet has its own interest

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The whole piece is charged with music. The italics are even sung.
Always wondered why italics are called italics and what they have to do with italians (LOL).

Later


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Your new prose reads as a poem. Will comment later, too drunk at the moment. Off to beddy it's a 4:48 MET.

Later

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Sorry about the double comment on your new piece. I pressed it once and it said "Cannot display page" Thus I clicked "Submit comment" again and it did the same thing, so I did it again and bleh.. Sowwy

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Thanks for the support of the I Do It All Right stories. You have the honor of being my first fan.

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~hammerofdog Go here to see my wonderful photography!

Yep agreed, Marvin in the middle is a great find

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The watch, was that a hidden code?
I dunno ... but I go blindly here ...

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Thanks much.

That story isn't the most original, and I haven't really worked on it lately, but I think I'm going to work on it some more and fix some things that were influenced by my Snow Crash (by Neal Stephenson) obsession at the time and finish it. When I'm really hooked on a book, sometimes I can be a little too influenced by it. I think I've not been doing that as much lately.

Thanks for both your comments. Later tonight, when I'm done with something I'm working on, I'll drop by and check out some of your works.

I thank you for adding me to your watch...
I shall return the favor...

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Every boy has a right to dream
He goes on in life, a journey
To see the world, to become wise
He goes on, unknowing
Of what this world has to give
He goes on this journey,
And on it, he discovers himself.

Thanks for your comment on my Of Telsa bunnies and dementia, it can be hard to understand in any language, but I am glad you thought it was cool